Minerva Girls by James Van Pelt (Analog, September/October 2020) starts with three precocious fourteen year old girls planning a trip to the Moon. Throughout the construction of their ship (or rather the adaptation of a gas station storage tank with insulation and an anti-gravity drive), Penny the narrator goes to summer school. As she struggles to master her geography lessonsâa list of states, etc.âwe see her situation in school, i.e. the tribalism, bullying, pettiness, and so on. When Penny isnât in class, or hanging out with Jacqueline and Selena, she works in her (presumably widowed) fatherâs scrap yard, where she sources the parts needed for the ship.
About half way through the story a ticking clock is introduced in the form of Selena and Jacquelineâs parents plans to move away, and the trio rush to test the anti-gravity drive:
By the time weâd solidified the anchors and rigged the power source, the eastern sky had lightened.
We crowded into the craneâs control booth fifty yards from our test site. Selena connected the video game joystick to the wires that ran to the Distortion Drive. She held it out to Jacqueline. âYou should do the honors.â
I had my phone out to film our results.
I guess I thought the Distortion Drive would rise up from the golf cart trailer until the cables stopped its progress. That, or it wouldnât move, which seemed more possible. I steadied the phone and turned on the video.
Jacqueline took a deep breath, then pushed the joystick forward a tick.
I lurched against the glass, as if someone had tipped the control booth from behind. Selena squeaked and caught herself from falling.
Jacqueline bumped her head on the window. Then the control booth shifted back into place.
I said, âWhat happened?â while rubbing my shoulder.
âDang,â said Jacqueline. âThatâs going to leave a welt.â She sat on the control booth floor, her notebooks spilled around her.
âMy machine!â Selena opened the door.
Jacqueline grabbed Selenaâs leg. âNot yet.â
A clattering like hail rattled the control boothâs metal ceiling for a couple seconds. Gravel and marble-sized rocks bounced off the ground around the booth. My toolbox that Iâd left next to the trailer slammed down along with the wrenches and other tools that had been in it.
âI hadnât considered that,â said Jacqueline. âIâll need to narrow the distortion field.â p. 33
Eventually (spoiler) they set off on their trip, and Penny sees North America from orbit: now that the land isnât an abstract shape on paper she can easily reel off the states and cities, and knows sheâll ace her geography test the next day. They continue on to the Moon.
I think I can see the attraction of this story, which is essentially a YA piece for teenage girls (although it harks back to the lone inventor trope itâs mostly about their personal tribulations). But I wonder if even that audience will manage to suspend disbelief at the thought of three fourteen-year-olds inventing a gravity drive and going to the moon.
I was also puzzled about the storyâs appearance in AnalogâI wouldnât have though that the magazineâs readers would be interested in something like this but, surprisingly, it won the novelette section of the Anlab Awards for 2020. I suspect the (mainly) American readership like sentimental YA material more than I do.
** (Average). 8,300 words.